This is a startling book spoken by a voice at once spare, cold, vulnerable, desperate, syntactically peculiar, elegant, disturbing, sexy, and even funny. Hotchkiss writes multi-dimensional, often heartbreaking, and always urgent poems.—Martha Rhodes
In this first book, Melissa Hotchkiss has already found her métier. She does remarkable things with brevity and foreshortening, and rarely the same thing twice.—Michael Ryan
Storm Damage views an ordinary world in a quiet, extraordinary way. The world is painted with words yet concretely defined at times by what is \not.' The poems make an arc of language and reflection, while remaining offbeat and disarming. They contain wonderful angles and new slants to 'see by'—Michael Burkard
Melissa Hotchkiss's poems have the powerful defamiliarizing quality of certain Eastern European films. One careful, oddly lighted take after another—focusing on the very minute, ordinary things—suddenly releases an enormous spookiness, sadness, or longing.—Alan Williamson
UNTITLED
I was touching your skin
hoping my body
could be your whole day
NEIGHBOR
Bitch, he says, bitch
I am pounding on the floor again
His music in my home
Moving down the stairs, now I am
Begging, almost at his door
It's torture, really, I hear myself saying
You have to understand
Does it really bother you that much?
I say yes
He says fine
Again, as his door closes
Bitch, he says, fucking bitch
LAST SATURDAY
I am in the driver's seat
My license has expired
My mother keeps repeating
"There is nowhere to plant the zinnias"
Nowhere to plant the zinnias?
Driving to a wedding on a bright clear day
She panics in a crowd of twenty
When she cannot find me
RETURN
Who has mentioned clear water right behind the white farmhouse
Who has mentioned a dark gray Dutch door
Who has mentioned tall birch trees growing, will they ever stop growing
Who has mentioned a baby grand piano, chipped ivory keys
These are the things that don't matter
Not food served or the ringing of a phone over blue linoleum
Or a draining, straining sink
Who has mentioned the sucking noise a parent makes with the end of their
reading
glasses after supper
Or the tall knife-like ice fallen from a roof in winter
Who has mentioned no sound at night‹does anyone remember
No whispering, no water dripping from a faucet, no doors banging from the
wind it
was quiet
Who has mentioned the maple tree struck by lightning during a summer thunderstorm
Or firewood, rotting near the driveway in April
Who has mentioned a cold perfectly cut granite floor
Who has mentioned a mother driving to the store
For all the ice in the world still unable to stop the nosebleed of a dying
white horse in spring
Or the son, in the doorway, waiting for her return